Excellent
Really great work with this. Even though it was short, I loved what you put together.
Excellent
Really great work with this. Even though it was short, I loved what you put together.
Haha
Pretty simple and short. The sound effects made me laugh though XD
Not bad, actually
This was actually not too bad. Simple and short yes, but better than many of the other sprite vids out there.
I just kinda wish the animation was smoother, rather than jumping from frame to frame.
Eh...
Well here's my criticism: never write that something you're submitting sucks. It invites people to zero-vote without even viewing the flash. And who knows, maybe it doesn't suck.
This, was mildly decent. Poor graphics yes, but the animation shows promise. I might like to see this redone with your current skills.
thanks SoulRed12.
yes im working on something better right now.
i think im going to call it : StickFight Avatar or something.
I ll keep your hint about writing that your submission sucks in mind.
i guess that was not a good idea ^^
greetz St0rmChaser.
Pretty good
Well it's a quality flash...like the drawing and stuff. (the head turning looked a little weird though XD)
The problem was that it wasn't that funny. I had a few laughs but nothing too big. That's more that a lot of people can say though XD
Clean slapstick humour is a tough job. Hopefully you'll find the next few more to your liking.
Too fast moving
It was too quick moving. The music changed every second, the action was choppy, and there was no real battle...just a couple hits and that's it. If you're going to do one of these kinds of movies, then try to make the next one smoother, and let each battle last longer.
Wow.
Apple frenching. Cuz I needed to see that. >.<
Haha, anyways, pretty good. You need a different mike or otherwise you should try to lay off breathing into it, because there's a lot of air sounds and it was a little distracting.
lulwut?
lol wtf? Sonic evolved into Captain Falcon...haha
Too random for me, it was some good animation but it didn't seem to have much of a point. Maybe make a point to the fighting next time instead of just having two characters going at it.
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