Not bad, but...
The shakiness of the camera was the biggest (and really only) problem. I know it's difficult to keep it perfectly steady but it's really important in something like this. I'd suggest instead of just setting the camera down and continually pressing it to capture the frame, put it on a tripod so it isn't so shaky.
"The dance" was good, but the fact that the camera kept jittering was pretty distracting.