Age/Gender: n/a, Male
Location: Nevada, USA
Job: Student
I write music, mostly downtempo and soundtrack. Someday I hope to write music for film and video games.
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I was going to suggest mixing up the piano melody a bit, but for some reason it seems to work without any variety. I don't know how you did it, but you did it...heh. Anyways, nice piece.
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Good one there.
The drum loop is pretty great, haven't heard much like it. I do have a few suggestions for it, though.
1) Lower them a little. Right now I think they take over a bit.
2) Vary them at least at some point. Make a filler, change it up when you switch parts, etc. Something to make them less predictable.
Other than that, it's a great piece. Good work. =D
Author's Response:
thanks! this is made a year ago, im better know ;P
yes i agree the drums are very overpowering and definitely could use with some variation and depth, it's a bit monotonous
xD thanks for the review!
-DJ Zoysa
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It should just be mixed a bit differently. The piano is more important than the high symbol and therefore should be louder than it IMO. Right now the drums seem to overtake it.
I'd really like to hear this piece again with those issues address, it should turn out great. ^_^
Author's Response:
Yeah... i agree, but it's all fixed now.
Cheers
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Not a bad piece, pretty cool in fact. Great bass, love the piano/synth-ish instrument.
I just wish the piece had some more changes in melody, etc. Even an ambient piece, if it's going to be that long, should be differentiated at least a bit. For 2:00+, 2 different parts just doesn't seem like enough.
Author's Response:
Thankyou for your sympathy :D, i did'nt have alot of time to finish it b'cause i was using a demo software, which could'nt save my progress. I will try to make something better next time.
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This is some awesome stuff. Amazing for use in a flash, etc. and even just to listen to on a regular basis. Great work, keep 'em coming.
Author's Response:
ive uploaded some new stuff since this... im slowly getting togethor enough bits and pieces for a good album... thanks for responding
more to come
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Pretty darn good for a twenty second piece. It would certainly serve it's purpose in a flash/game/etc...
Author's Response:
thank you for reviewing ... it's so short because a friend needed an intro theme... so I made this...
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They are great. And THANK you for putting some variety, and even including a repeated theme, that's something a lot of people are forgetting to do. ^_^
I'm really really liking this song, great work.
Author's Response:
Thanks man :D I also forget the varity many times.... This is one of the few times i actually remembered it.... Thanks again man :D
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Nice and peaceful, sounds like a lullaby in a movie. If you're going to have it 5 minutes long, though, it might use a bit more variety later on...other than that, it's really really good.
Author's Response:
thank you very much SoulRed12
it has 4 parts and contain 20 instruments
it's a song to think =)
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Should have been in Chrono Trigger. Sounds exactly like a new-age Chrono Trigger game. You have some great music here, good job. Keep it up. 4/5, 9/10.
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The song was pretty repetitive as were many others I've reviewed today. However, in this case, it's not so repetitive as to completely destroy it's worth as a background for a flash. My only advice here would be to either play it in a short time span or otherwise mix it up a bit later on.
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